Marilyn Hallowell thank you so much. This story was inspired by my own experience with “floaters” lol. When I saw the “eyes” prompt I knew the story I wanted to tell. You keep writing too, it’s the only way to hone those skills. Writing seldom comes easy for me, what you see as the end result is the story after I’ve agonized and sweated over it for hours. As Dorothy Parker said, “I hate writing, I love having written.”